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Well thank you,
Now please excuse me while I throw up,
I never realized I'm such a screw up.

I just couldn't tell you that I like you,
So I stomach you talking about her.

Well thank you,
Now please stand aside while I scream inside,
For once in my life I looked in the eyes and lied.

You asked me if I was doing alright,
I told you "I'm fine", but really I'm dying.

Well thank you,
Now please listen, I need to tell you how I really feel,
Will you just laugh at me and say that it isn't real?

I know you don't feel the same, you like her.
"You're my friend, you shouldn't have a crush."

Well thank you,
Now please excuse me while I slit my throat,
Your last memory of me is a tear stained note.

"I love you and I'm sorry, Good-bye."
©2006-2009 ~Avry
:iconavry:

Author's Comments

I really wish some people would learn to pay attention, you know? Enjoy.

-Gabe

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My writings are what they are. They are NOT perfect, so if you don't like them all I can say is "Sorry".
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The Art Deviation ~Avry~ is Copyright © 2006 Jack-S-Riddly
It was made for Avry and is used with permission.

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:iconmicxx:
i like this poem. i like how you get across the teenage angst that most people feel.

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When kisses are just favours returned.
:iconavry:
Thank you very much. :)

-Avry-
:icondrabros:
Wow... Such emotion. Things I've felt before- things most everyone's felt before. Great job again. As always, an amazing work.

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"If the facts don't fit the theory, change the facts." ~ Albert Einstein

"Little is the number that think with their own mind and feel with their own heart." ~ Albert Einstein
:iconavry:
Thank you, Drabros.

-Avry-
:iconsazroy:
*sniffle* this is how I feel about someone atm... OMG All ur poems remind me of me lol.. :hug: guys like this suck anus.

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Yea... U know ya love me!

98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If u're 1 of the 2% who hasn't, repost this.
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:iconlilithlairpoetry:
Feels like a song...the first two lines as a chorus...i must be losing my mind now..lol Great poem nonetheless

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Clubs
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:iconavry:
It's half and half, thanks for the comment.

-Avry-
:iconavry:
Yes they do. :O Heh. :hug: Thanks.

-Avry-
:icondreamerofshadows:
it has a very interesting angsty feel to it...i think it's how a lot of guys/girls feel when they like someone they can't have..i know...but i should shut up. well done, gab...hope to talk to ya soon....:( :cuddle:

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Some people think the earth is flat. That doesn't mean the world is flat - it just means those people are idiots.

"TV and the Internet are good because they keep the stupid people from spending too much time in public."
:iconavry:
Thank you, Nate... and I already know, I'm sorry. Thanks again.

-Avry-

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