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-Tears And Kisses- by ~Avry:iconAvry:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed




I try so hard to keep breathing,
The gun in my hand looks so good.
It's as though life lost its meaning,
But in my mind I keep seeing you.

I fall on my knees and I keep begging please,
Why won't life just go away?
Still I lay down each evening and shake off the feeling,
Knowing I'm lying with you.

You are my world,
You are my life,
Without you there is no light.

I need you to live,
I need you to breathe,
Without you there is no me.

And so the gun falls,
Kisses felt, tears roll.
Your voice softly calls,
"I love you" and that's all I need to know.
©2004-2009 ~Avry
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Author's Comments

Ever had a time in life where you wanted to throw everything away, where the gun was to your head but just before you pulled the trigger someone grabbed your hand?
No matter what you may think there is always at least ONE person that cares. One may be a small number but it's still as important as any other. They care about you more then you will ever know, so remember that before you decide to put a gun to your head. Enjoy.

-Gabe

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My writings are what they are. They are NOT perfect, so if you don't like them all I can say is "Sorry".
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The Art Deviation ~Avry~ is Copyright © 2006 Jack-S-Riddly
It was made for Avry and is used with permission.

Comments


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~lilpillpoppinprinces Jun 4, 2004, 6:24:41 PM
i absolutely love it. i know exactly what youre saying. and the last part sent chills down my spine. awesome
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~ryolink Jun 4, 2004, 6:24:58 PM
yea, i'm having that day. funny thing is, there is no one to pull my hand.

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!SolitarySinner Jun 4, 2004, 6:27:37 PM
Wow....I love that poem...its very true....You should post your poems on g4j [link] .....I love your poems .....they r so real.
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~Avry Jun 4, 2004, 6:34:54 PM
Thank You So Much.. It's Great To Hear It's Understood :)..

-Avry-
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~Avry Jun 4, 2004, 6:36:24 PM
I Had No One Either.. Till They Just Sort Of Popped Up And Smacked Me.. It May Be Someone You Know.. Or A Total Stranger.. Someone Will Come Along.. Hope Your Day Gets Better.. :) Thanks For The Comment..

-Avry-
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~Avry Jun 4, 2004, 6:40:15 PM
Thanks Adam.. It Means Alot.. I Will Indeed Look Into That..

-Avry-
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~Star-Tachikawa Jun 4, 2004, 6:57:16 PM
This is such a great poem. You have got to be one of the best poets I know. All of the poems that I've read can be understood clearly and many people can relate to them.

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Before you comment you must understand how to comment.
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~ThisBleedingHeart Jun 4, 2004, 6:57:36 PM
aww thats so sweet and so deep, i luv it
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~Eclipse121 Jun 4, 2004, 7:29:06 PM
i can totally understand, and i have people to grab my hand, i always will, i just think that they wont be there.

Illuisions are all in my mind though, i love the poem.
It means alot to me

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Just for once I want to be somebody's reason for waking up in the morning.

I :heart: °jark
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