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I woke up this morning,
Things went the way they always do,
But something was different,
I kept thinking about you.

I know that you're somewhere,
Holding on the best you can,
I feel I should be there,
Holding onto your hand.

I ran so quickly,
I knew I had to get through,
Something has happened,
I needed to see you.

Red flashes and sirens sound,
I was behind the yellow line,
You were lying on the ground,
Emotions I couldn't define.

I held my breath,
Waiting for everything to go away,
I can't live without you,
Things won't be the same.

The sunlight starts to fade,
All of you was all of me,
You looked so afraid,
The pain won't leave.

Please wait for me.
©2004-2009 ~Avry
:iconavry:

Author's Comments

Don't you just hate it when a gut feeling turns out to be right, but you were too late to act on that feeling and because of that something horrible happened? Enjoy.

-Gabe

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My writings are what they are. They are NOT perfect, so if you don't like them all I can say is "Sorry".
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The Art Deviation ~Avry~ is Copyright © 2006 Jack-S-Riddly
It was made for Avry and is used with permission.

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:iconelphame:
wow, i like it.

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:iconavry:
Great, Thank You :)..

-Avry-
:icond-monix:
Wow..so emotional and beautiful, i absolutely love it :D
:iconavry:
Yay! Thanks :)..

-Avry-
:iconsicknot:
i like the meaning thing your getting across

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:iconchrisdacre:
Wow I love it it's rlly gud :D
:iconrobert-the-dammed:
:)wow Avry that's gotta be one of your best pieces ever in my opinion:)its really really good and has so much emotion in it:)....I can kinda relate to some of it.....:)nice job:)
:iconavry:
Thanks..

-Avry-
:iconavry:
Thanks :)..

-Avry-
:iconsecundus:
awesome dood... :love:
exactly what I'd expect from someone as sexy as u ;)

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