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-Never What It Seems- by ~Avry:iconAvry:





No one would have guessed,
Until they saw the blood stains on her dress,
And the withered rose tucked in her hair.

That she was getting older,
Her nights kept getting colder,
There was no love inside her to share.

And so down she laid,
This pure beauty, unscathed,
An innocent girl so fair.

Her single shot fired,
All feelings retired,
She forgot anyone would care.

Darkness kept growing,
Her blue eyes still showing,
A hole in her chest from despair.

The stars above kept skipping,
Her blood to the floor was dripping,
She proved she wasn't scared.
©2004-2009 ~Avry
:iconavry:

Author's Comments

90% of an icebergs mass is HIDDEN below the surface, how many people are like that? Enjoy.

-Gabe

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My writings are what they are. They are NOT perfect, so if you don't like them all I can say is "Sorry".
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The Art Deviation ~Avry~ is Copyright © 2006 Jack-S-Riddly
It was made for Avry and is used with permission.

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:iconkornskaterfreak:
omg... that poem is awesome!!! I love it... and the picture is awesome to... the poem... is very awesome though... :clap:

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All I ever wanted was to pick apart the day and put the pieces back together my way. :tux: :cow2:
:iconneelrak:
that's really amazing, your words are moving.. great job on the poem. the imagery is so vivid
:iconmuted-shadow:
wow..very amazing. i like it
:iconforgotten-fate:
holy crap...amazing as usual...it's about time u wrote something!! this is absolutely amazing, great job!!
:iconstar-tachikawa:
Wow.. You have pure talent with words and expressions. :smooch:

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DA Buddhists
For those who are, and for those who support.
Before you comment you must understand how to comment.
:iconavry:
Thanks So Much.. *Smiles* Glad You Like Both :D


-Avry-
:iconavry:
Thank You Neel..:)

-Avry-
:iconavry:
Awesome.. Thanks..

-Avry-
:iconavry:
*Laughs* Yeah I Know.. Been At A Stand Still Way Too Long.. *Smiles* Thanks Fate..

-Avry-
:iconforgotten-fate:
lol yeah it's been a while...glad to read something by u...ttyl!

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